I take one look and I know for sure
The time is right for this will cure
The ailing moment knocking at my door
My next move is I wonder to fix it
How will I dress it
This thing before me
Long wet and ready
It is hot and steamy
Too hot to handle with hands alone
How will I dress it
It is all before me
Ready and waiting
I spot it and reach
And make the application
I make my first move with closed eyes
My hands make the instinctive move
I open my mouth to receive this thing
And take the first bite
I say to myself
Yes oh yes
This will surely do
My hunger will be satisfied
With this hot dog from beginning to end
Whatr U Workin On 
Comments on: "I Relish It" (12)
haha…was not sure where you were going…but you leave me hungry…nice one shot
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Oh yes! And lunch time is still hours away 😦 Perhaps this says more about me than you…but my thoughts were headed a totally different direction in the beginning! Great write 🙂
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Pass the mustard please.
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LOL Clever. Made me think of…well, never mind. Very nice set up for the ending.
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Nice extended metaphor. I especially appreciate the pun on "relish."
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Thanks everybody for your kind words…I tried really hard to keep it a secret as long as possible 😀
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Wait.. let me ketchup
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That's cute and funny too!
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@booguloo…too funny.
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Hi Reggieinteresting play on the sense… ;-)ॐ नमः शिवायOm Namah Shivayahttp://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.comTwitter @VerseEveryDay
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Creative, leaving smile on one's face! Loved the end!
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Hello, how are you?Simply want to check out on you and offer you our greatest appreciation for your support to potluck poetry. You rock!Reminder: week 18 Theme: Languages, Signs and SymbolsThe more you share, the happier we are. Plan ahead and have your entry poem. We are open Sunday 8pm, American Central time, linking in early would benefit your work with more encouragements.Hope to see you on Sunday at: http://jinglepoetry.blogspot.com/Let me know via email if you have questions or doubts.Again, we treasure your participation and would be great to see you again on week 18.
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