I am now at a time of transition
Making changes to achieve a goal
To return to form of what once was
Instead of the state of what is now
Discipline and desire will play a role
As I struggle through more obsticles
That await up ahead
I will persevere, of this I am sure
No waning, maybe a whine or two
But no giving up
This, not an option
I see light ahead, as sure as I see light
Positive this time, it’s not a firefly
For this light looms larger
As moments pass by and stuff
Keeps falling from the sky
I will move ahead and make an attempt
To bounce out of the darkness
Into the light up ahead
When my attempt brings success
I will be joyously filled with thanks
To the Almighty
For He has once again given me
Something I can bear
Linked to Thursday Poets Rally week 47
Comments on: "I Make An Attempt" (14)
well expressed sentiments, glad to see you join poets rally.
have fun visiting.
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Thanks Jingle…trying to stay positive
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Such a strong and positive poem. I love the sense of courage and perseverance
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Thank you mindlovemisery…trying to break out of this funk.
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A poem I can say ‘good for you’ to! Keep the faith!
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Thanks Helena…it’s definitely a battle
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You have a very strong mindset. I envy you for it. You will most certainly perservere 🙂
Fantastic poem.
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acoustic3…admittedly it takes all that I have right now to tell myself that what I put out is what I feel.
But you are right about one thing….I will persevere.
Thanks so much for your comment.
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Good luck in overcoming your challenges. Hope you find the light soon.
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Thank you tigerbrite.
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No matter what life throws your way, keep on staying positive, Reggie.
Nicely expressed.
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Thanks Andy, that’s the only way to go, right?
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life indeed is full of barriers, best wishes, you rock.
invite you to take our week 5 writing challenge,
anything comes to mind would be awesome to share,
smiles.
hope to see your in.
Happy Saturday.
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Bluebell Books, I appreciate you stopping by…as soon as I get things
in order I will be more than happy to submit a story or two.
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