See Things For What They Can Be

I Make An Attempt

I am now at a time of transition

Making changes to achieve a goal

To return to form of what once was

Instead of the state of what is now

Discipline and desire will play a role

As I struggle through more obsticles

That await up ahead

I will persevere, of this I am sure

No waning, maybe a whine or two

But no giving up

This, not an option

I see light ahead, as sure as I see light

Positive this time, it’s not a firefly

For this light looms larger

As moments pass by and stuff

Keeps falling from the sky

I will move ahead and make an attempt

To bounce out of the darkness

Into the light up ahead

When my attempt brings success

I will be joyously filled with thanks

To the Almighty

For He has once again given me

Something I can bear

Linked to Thursday Poets Rally week 47


Comments on: "I Make An Attempt" (14)

  1. well expressed sentiments, glad to see you join poets rally.
    have fun visiting.


  2. Such a strong and positive poem. I love the sense of courage and perseverance


  3. A poem I can say ‘good for you’ to! Keep the faith!


  4. You have a very strong mindset. I envy you for it. You will most certainly perservere 🙂
    Fantastic poem.


    • acoustic3…admittedly it takes all that I have right now to tell myself that what I put out is what I feel.

      But you are right about one thing….I will persevere.

      Thanks so much for your comment.


  5. Good luck in overcoming your challenges. Hope you find the light soon.


  6. No matter what life throws your way, keep on staying positive, Reggie.

    Nicely expressed.


  7. life indeed is full of barriers, best wishes, you rock.

    invite you to take our week 5 writing challenge,
    anything comes to mind would be awesome to share,
    hope to see your in.
    Happy Saturday.


    • Bluebell Books, I appreciate you stopping by…as soon as I get things
      in order I will be more than happy to submit a story or two.


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