See Things For What They Can Be

Time Share

      …hey, if you like to write and think you can do it in 55 words…it’s a chance to get it published in their Love In Creativity Project.

Your time, mine~are hours
Feelings of passion in air
No one knows, save we
It is ours, we share

Hearts tell the tale,
No one knows
Thump thump thump
Sweat, sweet rose

Releasing fruit sensuous
Boilers steaming, hot
Warming presence felt
Even tho touch, is not

Deep sighs of breaths,
Touch of no caress  


Comments on: "Time Share" (4)

  1. well done.the first line,do you mean "your time line is hours'?, I kind of curious about word of mine and line?


  2. @Bluebell Books, I revised the poem somewhat and found that I have the feel and flow I was looking for…thank you.


  3. Lovely Reggie! Feels like two people who can share what they're feeling with just a glance of their eyes. Very romantic. Be blessed.


  4. Elizena thank you so much for stopping by and for your kind words.


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